Matt Bellamy

Ooh, this is good. Very well written, and there's a lot going on in it...lots to take in. It's good, it has depth. Plus, I liked the way you put ...

I really liked the stye of this. Great use of repetition. I especially liked as I fall asleep, a light ray to a light ray, and dream of you, you ...

Well, just to confuse you, I am going to say I have a completely different opinion to Dreami :) I liked the style of your poem, I liked the run ...

I liked the style of this, it's so juvenile (sp?). The lack of commas and grammar in places created something that otherwise would have been crap if the whole concept ...

Pretty good. Blank pages are evil :twisted: and should be wiped out. I'm not sure about how you repeated the word say- The cold blank pages stare at me. Mock ...

I wasn't convinced by the line breaks in the first stanza, and, being the lazy reader that I am, it dragged on a little too long for my liking. The ...

I found it quite empty. I saw someone on one poem say that it could have been written by anybody, and I think this applies here. You need to develop ...

Jah, I loved it. Especially "...(which would fit far less perfectly than hers upon the piano) Because if I had, I could let the world hear the sounds of my ...

Well, I was quite amused. Although "ssorry, before i was so RUDELY interruupted!" doesn't make sense, and I wasn't sure why jay said 7 a little bit after that. I ...

A couple of mistakes-"I fall in love to fast" should be "I fall in love too fast" and loose should be lose. I liked "I grasp at soft flesh and ...

I'm not much of a political person, I must admit I don't take half as much interest in the news as I probably should, but I caught the gist of ...

You have such a knack for description, it really is beautiful. But, and I hate to say it, be careful you don't overdo it. If people are too lazy to ...

A lot of description, which you do very well. Maybe not so great for lazy readers, but it doesn't matter, your stories wouldn't be the same without it. You take ...

I liked the layout of the first stanza, you represented gravity visually, not just with words. Also, I liked the last stanza because it seemed to suggest that you're not ...

Not sure if I liked the poem itself, as in the subject, but I liked the way you wrote it as if it was the end of a thought you're ...